Other people’s lives: the story so far …

 

G: Well, I like it! Would be interested in other opinions.

 

D: Much better than I was expecting.  To my surprise an album I enjoy where I don’t feel the need to reach for the Forward button even after a number of listens. 

 

Andy (wife, Andrea) volunteered a thumbs up whereas previously for post-Hillbillies stuff it’s only been a ‘best of’ compilation I threw together for a couple of doubter chums that has held her attention. 

 

I await the magazine reviews with considerable interest – hope someone gives it to Jon Savage.  And Jesse Walker on the KPS.

 

R: I wrote this without reading the other reviews so really didn't counter point anyone and my comments lack some depth but the capture my feeling.Also, not having a chance to hear Ray live, all songs were new to me.

 

O: It was a relief to KNOW that the album was real, and pretty much definitely due to be released some time this century! There is vaguely encouraging review in this month’s Mojo.  Ray has actually claimed in another Mojo interview (Nov?) that this album is autobiographical!  Rather unusual of him to admit anything of the sort. Is he mellowing, or once again throwing sand in our eyes? If he is baring his soul, then maybe this is his “Songs of Experience” album (after all, we are all exhorted to write about what we know!)

 

 When I first heard “Morning After” I had the feeling that he had written this song about his relationship with Pat (before I knew that they had parted). There are songs in the Kinks kanon which I am sure refer to the ending of his relationships with Rasa and Yvonne, and I am convinced that some of those on this album are the musical exorcism of his relationship with Pat.  (Not to mention Suzanne).

 

I delighted that he has used keyboards on the album; how could he not?  I really miss them on stage. I reckon he won’t have a keyboard on stage because he’ll have to pay for another musician! Also lovely to hear some sax and the odd moment or two of harmonica

 

I have found this album to be in general, one of hope, of overcoming adversity.  We were all a bit baffled and dismayed when Ray chose to sing Yours Truly Confused N10 that New Year’s Eve, and we found no humour as such to deflect from its sad message (despite the jaunty accompaniment).  We wondered what had happened to our Ray who used to sing of silver linings, and better things. We could see our country going to the Dogs, but we wanted him to tell us that there was something better round the corner. The gloominess was a surprise and there was no let up. This sentiment is echoed in Stand Up Comic, another song with a nice bouncy rhythm belying the savage (and true) sentiments. Other People’s Lives is also another song in the angry vein, well maybe not angry – scathing perhaps.

 

 Angry is his live and heartstoppingly brilliant 20th Century Man.  I played the original a few weeks ago, and it seemed tame to what Ray has made it now.  However I’d say that a good percentage of the songs on the album are about new beginnings; however painful they might be.

 

Every day this week I have been waking up with a different track running through my head. It’s ages since that has happened.

 

L: For what it's worth, here's my comments on Other People's Lives.  I probably shouldn't have, but I did skim through the thread so far, which Rob forwarded to me.  My comments, however, are what I would have written had I not seen any of the comments.

 

My overall impression if one of great pleasure and relief.  This is a great album!  The relief comes in realizing that Ray did not waste all this time he's spent working on it.  I love the title, "Other People's Lives," just because it's such a succinct description of so many of Ray's songs over the years.  Not a total triumph, but strong and consistent.  For instance, I don't think there's anything as weak as, say, "Somebody Stole My Car." 

 

Ray's voice is in excellent form throughout.  It certainly sounds like Ray music, but without Dave's guitar it doesn't really sound like the Kinks to me (which is not necessarily a bad thing).

 

"Morning After" G: I have always liked this song, except for the very first Jane Street version, where the guitarist from Los Asparagos, or whatever they were called, was playing in the wrong key. I still like it, but I feel the studio version has lost some of the power of the live performances. I particularly miss Mark Johns's guitar runs (notably the Basingstoke performance), which seem to have gone from the instrumental break.

 

Not sure what I would have thought if I hadn't heard it live first.

 

W: Any album that starts with whale song gets my vote :) Things are gonna change I really like. I haven't got a clue what he's going on about, but I like the tune, the twangy guitar, and the fact that I can join in singing "Things are gonna change" in an indignant
spleen-venting fashion.


BG: I agree with g about the live version. If I'm not mistaken it had that very long and weird instrumental break/intro which was a bit different. Great song, all the same, puts me in mind of Do It Again, which of course he paraphrases.

 

D: I love the overall noise of MA.  Think it’s potentially one of those tracks that turns heads when it comes over record store PAs.  Particularly like “You feel shite / the air bites” and “I will, I bloody well will”.  Reaches the parts other songwriters would never dream of acknowledging in song.

 

R: Liked it when I first heard it, reminds me of 80/90's Kinks.

 

O: When I heard this at Jane Street I was rather disconcerted by the noise! (I think this was the one where a Japanese bloke was playing about with a twin deck making those weird noises with some old vinyl).  I prefer the intro on the album rather than the live one, which goes on for ages while Ray changes into yet another shirt! Yes, W, whale music with perhaps a couple of elephants with wind thrown in for good measure. And what’s with the growly burp just after this?  I love the brash cymbals at the start and the compelling drum beat. This is a song about optimism in the face of emotional defeat when one is reeling in mental and emotional confusion. I feel that there has been real blood, sweat and tears experienced, some of which has been transmuted into this wonderful song. I agree with DQ about the wonderful overall noise of the piece.

 

L: My favorite on the album.  This one grabbed me within the first 30 seconds and I knew right away it was a classic.  Great slashing guitars, pounding rhythm, a mood of foreboding balanced by defiance and hope.  You can hear something different with each repeated listening.

 

"After The Fall" G: Good song, glad the lyrics are sorted now, apart from the dubious use of "platitude" again) but I think he has gone the wrong way with the arrangement. Would have been better with big strings and not so much harsh guitar, and I hate the higher register power singing (aka shouting) towards the end. The Spivs version will be better :-)

 

W: After the Fall should be bad, but is one of those songs I liked first time round and still do. The tune sort of mooches along doing tuneful things with a juicy couple of guitar chords making sure you don't forget they are there.

 

Lyrically there's the sort of positive stuff in there that you can choose to ignore if you prefer the doom and gloom bit, or should the whim strike, you can be braced and uplifted by some lovely almost Meatloaf purple meaningfulness. 'Seems like I'm falling upwards.' Fantastic!


BG: Not really sure what I think of this one. It plods along a bit, (then it plods along a bit more), but I like the heavy guitar riff. Lyrically it's interesting and as Lynn suggests, you can treat it as depressing or uplifting, but I would have to say the arrangement suggests depressing. The Spivs version will be more uplifting :-)

 

D: Classic late Kinks.  Nice opening.  Tremendous song full of self deprecating humour and, um, wisdom with some great lines.  Despite a certain clumsiness and conscious artfulness at times in the lyrics, he gets away with it because it’s such a great vocal performance – I hear passion more than shouting.  “I shouted to the heavens / And a vision appeared / I cried out, Can you help? / It replied, Not at all” sets the tone beautifully – he’s out of the doom from the start.  I can live with ‘platitude’, quite like it actually.  And please, no strings necessary.

 

R: Grew on me, currently one of my favorites on the album, like the feel of Ray's voice.

 

O: What a beautiful silver intro which deceives the listener into thinking this is going to be a gentle song…then BOOM, KARRANG we’re into something much different.  He has used “platitudes” in the right context but why are they “high”?? Is it like High German, or even High Mass?  Loads of spiritual imagery here, and the inclusion of “Bleak Midwinter” adds to it all. This song really lifts me to a higher level….”Seems like I’m falling upwards into the deep wide blue” is just a perfect killer line. I did expect a bigger choir, and I think I too expected strings. Not sure if the echo on “way we’re gonna go” actually works. More of Ray’s favourite Mist imagery too which has pervaded many of his songs.

 

L: Very strong track.  The first lines make me wonder if he's referring to his New Orleans ordeal.  Great vocal performance.

 

"Next Door Neighbours" G: I know there are some who think the lyrics a bit patronising, but I have no problem with them. I bet O was delighted that Essex got the nod over other potential origins for the blonde :-) (Hmmm, is that why Marion hit the bleach? :-) )

 

I think Ray has missed a trick here. There are some nice bits of brass coming in, but I think there should be a lot more - the whole thing could really bounce along - in the style of Oasis's "Importance of Being Idle" :-)

 

W: BG says I could say that he is keener on this than I am. Well, I could say that, but equally I could say that almost anyone is keener on this than I am. Indeed, this is the first time I have not pushed the 'next track' button when it has come on (I am listening as I type). g is right to say that some people think this song patronising. There is just something deeply smarmy about the whole thing. As if he has thought 'Hmmm. let's write a song of nice little encapsulated vignettes that reflect my natural aptitude for writing about the little people in my inimitably English style' Or something similarly pretentious. As if he has believed all the rhubarb written about Village Green and suffered a head up the bum moment or two... well, mercifully we are on to the next track, so I can stop ranting.


BG: No we're not, because I'm going to have my say :-) This has grown on me since I first heard it way back in 2002, I think. Then I thought, oh blimey it's one of Ray's formulaic 'little people' songs, but I don't dislike this album version.

 

Back in the 60's, a reviewer once countered the criticism that Rays lyrics were patronising by pointing out that he invariably wrote from a sympathetic standpoint, and I think that applies in this case. "They say he may have hit rock bottom, still, he went out with a bang, so he is not forgotten" saves the song lyrically in my view.

 

D: I’m with W in her surmise as to the song’s generation but I have to say that the recorded arrangement has won me over - there’s a compassion in the vocal and the melody is accentuated.  Just wish he’d come up with better names and that insistence on the Mr.

 

R: Typical Ray, enjoyable but no one that grows on me with repeated playing.

 

O: The first two times I heard this he sang “New Jersey blonde” for his American audience, on the third night it was “Essex” and I nearly fell over the balcony in excitement! I am glad Essex has stuck for the album. (Marion’s colour change might seem a bit suspicious g, but she wanted a change!J  I think the blonde is much softer!).  Anyway, back to the critique….this is not one of my fave tracks. I agree with W and DQ as to the possible origins of the song (caught you out Ray!! LOL!) I do like the singalong feel it now has, with a touch of dance band thrown in. This song seems to be a progression from the one he wrote about his mad neighbours on Phobia. He is looking back with genuine affection and humour, but I dunno, sometimes it seems a bit glib. I prefer the studio version.

 

L: This was one of my least favorites at first.  It almost seemed like a parody of a Ray song.  Upon repeated listenings it is growing on me more.  The lyrics are better and more genuinely poignant than I originally thought.

"All She Wrote" G: I think this is terrific - my favourite track. It has the wittiest lyrics and it has turned into a proper pop-rock song. Love the drums. I might even be persuaded to dance to this. Still not sure why he was and is a cold piece of Spam :-)


W: I really liked All She Wrote the first time I heard it, even if it did lead me off on a flight of fancy about what it is with Ray and BABs. (I don't know if it was my imagination, but Australian hussies seemed to crop up several times at Basingstoke).

 

The jangly noisiness of it quite appeals, although I am told it would be better if Mark Johns played his guitar with his testicles, which has me a little bemused. I rather like the irony of someone going off with another bloke on the strength of how much they resemble the old, or even of thinking it might be some sort of comfort for the dumpee.


BG: My favourite track on the album. Great tune and witty lyrics reminiscent of Ray at his best, and what I actually said was it's a pity Mark Johns doesn't play with a bit more balls :-)

 

D: A hell of a song, and yes that is a great line, “He reminds me of you”.  But what about “A few killer lines on that suicide note” at the end?  Is she really dead?  Am I hearing it right?  If so, what’s the new vegetarian boyfriend about?  Or is it – dark, dark, dark – her recognition of some sort of repetition compulsion of doomed relationships?  I hope someone asks him about this in the inevitable round of interviews that must ensue? 

 

I love the ooh oohs, they lift it to another dimension and then the organ comes in.  Pye era chord riffs in there throughout too. Bitter scam, I think.

 

R: Good energy, meld of 2000 Ray with 80's feel, Ray vocal's work well.  A favorite of mine, would be on a Ray GH album.

 

O: Oh, what a brilliant song! I too stopped in my tracks when I heard the “suicide note“ line.  I can’t remember it being in the song when he originally sung it. Remarkably witty and yet as DQ says, DARK. Yes, I think this is a gold covered bitter chocolate mint of a song. Maybe she left him for the other bloke, and yet couldn’t face life without the miserable bugger and ended it all anyway. I love the line “That’s all she wrote, on the back of an old brown envelope”. The great lines that a woman would very possibly write to an ex lover. It all seems so realistic, which makes me wonder if he is actually quoting from something an ex lover wrote. Interesting that she left him for someone very similar – a well known phenomenon. I bet the Ray person used to laugh a lot in the early days! This song just rings so true. But that suicide note just turns it all on its head…it’s not just an ordinary goodbye note. “Killer lines” – “Suicide note” clever juxtaposition.

To me it sounds like the “cold bitter scam” was written by the girl, about herself. Love the organ in the background.

 

L: Another solid rocker.  Great, driving, "middle eight."  Kinks-ish backing vocals.  The "suicide" twist at the end is a bit of a shocker.  Still trying to work that bit out.

 

"Creatures of Little Faith" G: I am really not sure why I don't like this more than I do. I really like the chord progression and the guitar work (hints of George Harrison?), and there is sax on it - I always wished the Kinks had used sax more. Unusually, I think it must be the lyrics that bug me, although they seem well enough constructed and form a coherent story. They get off to a bad start with the tacky "You caught me with my pants down, But I was only taking a shower" (Hmmm, that IS pants, Ray). Also I don't like the "talky" style that creeps into the singing.

 

W: Creatures of little faith should be good, but leaves me cold. A shame, as I thought when I first heard it that a couple more years rumination would turn it into something quite special. Somehow it reminds me of 'to the bone' but without the ability to insinuate itself. Even the sax doesn't do it, which is cause for concern! And I hate the talky bits. And as for the overdone glottal stop, ARGHHHH! Just rather disturbing that it has many of the things that should make a good song and still manages not to be. (IMHO, no offence)


BG: Likewise, should be better than it is really. It's alright I suppose, nice enough melody but as g and W have already said, not even the sax saves the day. I agree with the 'talking' comments to.

 

D: I share some of the misgivings and also hate, nay loath, the opening lines.  I guess it’s meant as metaphor rather than dramatic action but it just doesn’t work.  Does no-one in the organisation have the balls to to give Ray genuine constructive criticism?  Yes, it could be so much better than it is.  Nice overall sound, good hook of a tune with interesting guitar tones.  Nice lyrical inversion in, “I am …”

 

R: Accessible, passable album track, little overproduced.

 

O: The opening lines don’t do it for me (despite the mental picture of Ray in the shower!) If I came up with this line at a song writing course, I am sure he would condemn it as trying to get a cheap laugh. However, it’s a clever story, going from one suspicious mind to another, and sadness at the lack of faith people have in one another. The sax is great (they always say that! LOL!) However, it finishes on an upbeat message. It’s not my favourite track I must admit. And I don’t think anyone in his little set up does have the balls to advise Ray on his lyrics or anything at all for that matter! He should come to us first, we’d set him right! Yes, and why the glottal stops? Dearie me. Like the shaker at the end.

 

L: I love this one.  I think the melody, vocal, and arrangement are gorgeous.  Witty and touching lyric.  One of my favorites.

 

"Run Away From Time" G: Great. How could I not love this? It has piano AND organ! It rocks too. Is that Dave Davies on guitar? (No, I know it isn't, but it sounds as if Mark is doing a Dave impression.)

 

Haven't got a clue what the lyrics mean though. Can you run away from time or not?

 

W: Time is the avenger. Wot?!? John Steed? Emma Peel? I just don't get it. 'Hey Girl, lets run away from time why have time when there are platitudes to climb? Maybe baybe you can save me from the avenger ... '

 

Is it me, or has he just got lazy? I feel somewhat let down that after umpteem years twiddling with the album, he has still left some pretty sloppy stuff in. Probably totally unfair of me, but it feels rather self-indulgent, like the bleedin lonesome train. Surely there are other epithets available.


BG: I agree, a bit of a filler in my view. Ok, it rocks along, but the lyrics are very poor, a really good example of words to fill gaps.

 

D: Very acceptable filler.  I don’t really listen, rather just swan around in the glorious ensemble classic ‘80s Kinks sound and, yes, the DD impersonation observation is spot on.  I thought I heard his voice in there too just the once.  Time is the avenger? – some sort of karma if you let it?

 

R: Another favorite from the album on initial hearing, nothing too deep, an easy listen.

 

O: “Good Bye Honeybunch” beginning? This is glorious! God I love it to death! I think The Spivs will do an extremely good cover version of this! I jump about to this and sing at the top of my voice. Yeah, I think DQ has got the answer, to the Time is the Avenger question – karma’s gonna getcha! J Maybe it is a song for the slighter older generation, many of whom are preoccupied with trying to turn back the clock (including himself with his red hair dye! ;-) ) Absolutely bleeding brill!! I hope he does this live (although I’ll miss the keyboards). Mind you, I am a little confused about the lyrics, at one moment he is dissing people for trying to turn back the clock, and then he exhorts his loved one to run away from time with him.  Is he with a younger woman, a relationship with which will help make him feel younger? The oohs are nice.

 

L: This one reminds me of the Rolling Stones for some reason.  Ray trying to escape the aging process?  Kind of lightweight, but very enjoyable.  Was the "time is the avenger" line a conscious nod to Chrissie Hynde's "Time the Avenger"?

"The Tourist" G: Love it. Good feel to it, nice riff, splendid bridge. I like the power chord section too, but I wish there were lyrics over it - it seems a bit of an odd digression as it stands.

 

W: Oh thank goodness, something has come on that I think is just brill. I love the Tourist. All atmospheric and moody, and captures the feeling of the Chinese in Basildon where the staff stand and watch your every move. Are they sizing you up, just waiting to creep after
you in the concrete shopping centre and pounce on you as you negotiate another poorly lit set of steps?.....

 

I really like the way it lopes along in a semi-hypnotic way and is full of stuff that is well crafted enough to look as if he hasn't had to try. I don't personally have any problem with the loud bit of noisy goings on without vocal stylings , but can 'see' what the noise is being, in a synaesthetic arty farty sort of way, so it justifies its own existence in my book.


BG: I pretty much second the above and I've been to that Chinese in Basildon. I'm possibly slightly less keen on the track, but it's a goody!

 

D: Fantastic!  I’m with W on the loud bit of noisy goings on.  I’d go so far as to claim it as one of the great moments of rock and roll.  A boiling resentment and frustration at the situation the verses describe – we are all implicated in this, there is no escape – and a gleeful recognition of what fun it is to make all this musical noise.  Love it.  He has to add keyboards to the live band.

 

R: Really wanted to like this a lot, it is good, it is the new Ray, but with repeated playing falls to an album track, have not heard it live but may work better with less production.

 

O: Gawd, we’ll have to eat somewhere else than that Chinese now!! J I’ll have visions of this song every time I go there.

Bloody great fantastic song! It makes me want to snake around the room to the sinuous sounds. I was so excited when I heard this in the Isle of Man – it had *hit* written all over it. I told him afterwards that he ought to release it as a single. He sort of took my freely given advice! LOL! Love the lyrics; sharply observed.  The noise is magnificent (it just gets overpowering when it’s live and the band have been told to play loud and Ray has another shirt change!). Aw, Money, Money!!! It’s sheer brilliance! Thank God Shepherd’s Bush is a standup, I hope he does this one there and we can give it the welly it really deserves. Absolutely brill! Love the lines “dogs fighting in the street”, “flash my platinum”, smashing bridge and of course the noisy chorus J

 

L: I'm not sure about this one.  The lyrics seem to cross the line into mean-spiritedness.  The jury is still out, but so far not one of my favorites.  I do like the abrupt ending.

 

"Is There Life After Breakfast?" G: A bit of a throwaway but a fun song. Error in the lyrics - "Pour the tea and I'll be mum" doesn't work - should be "Make the tea..."

 

W: Life after breakfast. Brill stuff. All kinds of neat little tuney tricks that not doing O level music makes me unable to discuss, but I like them. Also, there are several examples of Ray's wonderful disregard for where the stresSES on cerTAIN syLLAbles should be, which
always make me smile, and some lovely lines like 'Don't turn into a total embarrassment to your friends and family' And the angelic little tail off is just so awful it's wonderful again. Did I say I like this one?


BG: Hear hear. I don't think this is a throwaway at all g. A Lola strum to open, and echos of Two Sisters throughout, particularly the middle eight that sounds like it's about to go into "She'd throw away her dirty dishes just to be free again", Great!’

 

D: Yes, I like it a lot.  Will be great to sing along to.  What larks.  Maybe goes on a bit too long.  Nice slide guitar, lovely coda.

 

R: A "Predictable" Ray song, a bit long but I think about it after breakfast!

 

O: Oh another fave. I wonder if this is the sort of advice Mum Davies gave her boys when they went home with a broken heart and he’s recalling what she said to jolly him along. (For some reason I keep thinking of Chrissie Hynde here, when he definitely WAS on the tablets).  I love the total embarrassment stanza – really funny. Lovely tinkly intro. Like the subtle harmonica, and the mandoliney sound. Oh a pub singalong song definitely!

 

L: Totally charming, and manages to steer clear of self-parody.  One of my favorites.

"The Getaway". G: Nice and moody. Good hook. Neil Young on vocals? What non-Kinks song does this remind me of?

 

W: Lovely guitar sound to start the next track, lulls one into a sort of Ah, now I can get all mellow and relaxed state, and then Neil Young starts singing about lonesome trains. Such a shame. There are quite a few nice moments in the song, but the mood has been  shattered by one jarring moment. (Maybe I should write this when I have recovered from
having the kids around over Christmas!)


BG: Interesting arrangement, nothing to really offend, and why shouldn't Ray try to adopt different vocal styles from time to time? I like it. What does it remind you of g?

 

D: Not a lot to say right now.  Like it a lot.  The sound is like nothing else in the canon.  If I heard it on the radio I’m sure I’d say, Shit – who’s that? And be interested.  It builds beautifully too, the return of Ray the arranger.  Wish I could work out what it reminds me of.

 

R: Good mood and sound, not sure I liked the words "Sunny Afternoon" worked into it as it causes me to compare, drags on a bit.

 

O: he’s pinched riffs and the backing oohs from “Storyteller” – nothing like plagiarising your own work (which he’s very good at!). I don’t like the use of “Sunny Afternoon”….oh come on…there are loads of words that could be used instead of sunny! That spoils it for me a bit as Rob said, it starts to make me think of something else.  As above, I am not sure about the “lonesome train” either…couldn’t he come up with something better? I expected to hear a harmonica to depict the train and was quite disappointed that it wasn’t there.  I regard this an adult echo of the running away songs on Return to Waterloo. However, I do like the song.  There is a real wistfulness there, even though I suppose it’s a positive song with someone making the break to a better life. Makes you wonder what these people were putting up with and how they actually made the break.

 

L: After several listenings, this one has left the least impression of any song on the album for me.  Ray sets a nice mood, but the melody isn't strong enough to support it for over six minutes.  Kind of kills the album's energy and momentum.

"Other People's Lives" G: Mr Reporter revisited, with better constructed lyrics. Something of a steal from Santana's "Smooth" Any ideas who the female vocalist is?

 

W: Other People's Lives is one of my favourites. Another one of the songs that I can see, and her voice is just ideal for what she is doing (Bebel Gilberto maybe?) (sp?). More dubious stressing of syLLAbles, a slightly more subtle Confused N10 element to it, and nicely understated guitar stuff going on. This one could happily sit on a loop for a few days without me feeling the need to change it. Somehow Ray's voice sounds relaxed and happy doing what it's doing as well, without the edge of him consciously playing a part which sometimes intrudes on other tracks. Having ranted about other tracks, a bit of a
gush is justified here. I can't really see how this one could be improved upon.


BG: I'm sure this is a very fine effort, just doesn't do it for me I'm afraid.

 

D: Tremendous lazy groove and love the woman’s voice weaving in and out.  Nice use of ‘vom-it-ted’.  He doesn’t sound like a victim, does he?  The contempt sheathed in silk.  It’s never gonna be one of my favourites but it’s a nicely constructed piece that I’ll not tire of, I suspect.

 

R: Like the fresh sound, causes me to tap my foot.  Good production and Ray doing what he does best with the lyrics.

 

O: This is also “Word of Mouth“ revisited! Love it. Hey, really coooool!! I love the talk bit at the start and listening to his non committal voice! Love the whangy guitar bit.  Agree with the Confused N10 elements. OOH, the bridge is brill. I like the Latin feel – another song to slither around the room to. Very gentle feel but the words are sharp and cutting. I remember him saying once that a friend of his was really hurt by something she had read about her on the internet, so maybe that inspired this song. Extremely catchy.

 

L: Ray revisits, yet again, the same theme he's already covered adequately in "Give the People What They Want" and "Entertainment."  Very nice musically, and partially redeemed by some very funny lines (rhyming "read" with "vomited" is particularly inspired), but loses points for the annoying female backing vocal.

"Stand Up Comic". G: Hmmm this really works much better as a live performance.


W: Stand up Comic I like enormously. Yes, I know he's probably being his most self-consciously someone else of all the tracks on this album, but it works brilliantly. I don't miss the live performance element.

 

The lyric is just so perfectly fitted into the tune, as if the whole thing has equal weight and came as one piece rather than two strands that had to be beaten into order. As I get older I appreciate relaxed far more than grunting and heaving and sweaty effort! (If Ray has grunted and heaved privately, that's fine. Just give me the end result)


BG: Live this is one of my favourites, and I think it's a good attempt to get that live feel on the album. Nicely constructed tune and lyrics, and social comment to boot. Nice to see the rationing of f***ing, just once in the first verse and not repeated. Makes it a much
stronger statement.

 

D: I’m coming round to this version, nice band groove.  Agree heartily about the adjectival restraint.  Would still love to have a video of the second (?) time I saw him do this with Pete Matheson – a riveting tour de force of a performance like Olivier as Archie Rice in the film of John Osborne’s ‘The entertainer’.


R:
Caught me off guard on first listen.  Really like it's playfulness.  Would love to hear it live.

 

O: I too prefer this live, but agree with BG that it’s a good attempt to get the live feel on the album. There is a 60s B movie feel with the sax going on in the back. Such clever lyrics, and a very true observation of what’s happening to our society here.  I think the *rubbish* shout is bit too clinical, but I suppose if it were rowdier it would spoil the rhythm of the section.

 

L: Could have been an embarrassing novelty, but the manic energy of the track makes it a fascinating experiment.  A tour-de-force vocal performance from Ray.  One of the most interesting records Ray has ever made.

 

"Over My Head" G: Good one. Love the guitar, particularly at the start -  there is no way that is Dave Davies :-) Good hooks, one of which is lifted from "Not Far Away"

 

W: Over my head reminds me of something, but I don't know what. Could be Ringo Starr 'It don't come easy'. Not a favourite, but pleasant enough.


BG: I really like this one. To me it sounds more like a Kinks track than anything else on the album (only the musicianship gives it away :-) Seriously, this could be a mid 80s Kinks number, lifted from Return to Waterloo perhaps.

 

D: Hey, Loony balloon time again.  And loads of other likenesses.  And none the worse for it.  Singalong time again.  But nicely developed and great rhythm guitar work.  This is a man who has achieved a certain peace with the world.

 

R: This flows with me.  Brings me back to late Kinks which I like, may be a pit overproduced.

 

O: Oh what a beautiful song! The piano just drives me joyfully insane with its twinkliness, and it grunty, growly echoes later in the song. That instrumental break is just out of sight! I think this one for The Clissold Arms in November! Another survivor song. Absolutely gob smacking brilliant! Love it, love it, love it!! Absolutely echoes my sentiments….have a pig of a day and go to bed and wake up to do battle on the morrow. You can feel the pain he’s writing about. Love the clangy sound. Absolutely gorgeous. That piano makes it; it would lose so much if he did this live without a keyboard.

 

L: My second favorite on the album.  I can't say I've really analyzed the lyrics of this one too much, but I love the feel of the track and the melody of the chorus.  Also features a really cool guitar break.

"Thanksgiving Day" G: I quite like it, but it is not as strong as some. I think I prefer the alternative version. Like the choir.

 


W: Thanksgiving Day. G says he will possibly write something to offset my negativity, so I will just say 'All over her American face' is probably the only redeeming feature of this blindingly crass attempt to cash in on American sentimentality. This song is just beyond
patronising.


BG: I'm sorry but I agree this really is very poor. Nothing to recommend it, American lyrical content, talked parts, boring melody. Should have been left off the album properly and not even tacked as a bonus track. How many versions of this EP are there? Putting this out as a single suggests to me that Ray needs better advice, or is it, as W suggests, a crass attempt to cash in?

 

D: I think it’s a good piece of work.  The ‘American face’ line is a tremendous one.  It’s a nice piece of writing, lovingly constructed, the closest he’s ever got, I warrant, to yer actual poetry.  Cinematic storytelling, sweet and sour.  There’s more than a hint of The Band and even Dylan in here.  I love the choir and the Stax licks – presumably the reason we don’t get the Otis Redding song on this album.  It’s fair enough homage, I think.


R:
Maybe the American in me draws me to this song but I think Ray has captured the feeling on Thankgiving and I will certainly be playing it about 5 weeks before Father Christmas every year.

 

O: Not one of my faves, but the “all over her American face” line is just beautiful. I think the lyrics are rather awkward in places, but as DQ says it is cinematic storytelling. Maybe it would work better with an accompanying video. I just get the idea that Papa misses his wife merely because she used to cook the Thanksgiving Dinner! The Crouch End chorus is cool. The All Over lines are quite compelling and I sing along to them. I would have preferred a stonker to end the album.  I did hear that this would be a *hidden* bonus track.

 

L: I don't really like that this is a "hidden" track at the end of the album.  I think "Over My Head" makes a better closer.  That said, the song itself is first rate.  Can't decide which mix I prefer, but it's a great song and really whet my appetite for the full album.

 

A solid 4 star (out of 5) album.  I appreciate the chance to hear it in advance of the official release date.  Now I'll go back at look at everyone else's comments more closely.